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Sunday, 22 December 2013

Snowflakes......



upon my wake
makes me smile
drifting down
if only for awhile
on this town

white like diamonds
tear drops of rain
frozen 
like my heart

makes a snowflake

sparkle
vanishing

on my black dress
like jets in the night.

~DeniseAngela~


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17 comments:

Irene ~Melodies In The Sand~ said...

I love your words... you make snow sound so magical. ♡ :-)

Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...

Mademoiselle Modelle,

Such a sweetly formed impression of snowflakes and the gentle movement as they connect with our being...
Eileen

Brian Miller said...

great visual, them against the dress like the night sky...i like the hush of snow...its the closest thing to peace for a frozen heart, you know...smiles.

Truedessa said...

Enjoyed the vision of diamond snowflakes..even if they are only
on the town for a bit...

Robert Bourne said...

this poem reminded me that winter can be beautiful and sensual...even though I am buried in ice... :)

Grace said...

I too am buried in ice and sleet ~ But I like the snow flakes as shining diamonds ~ That gif is amazing ~

TALON said...

They are like that - brief flashes of brilliance. I love how you made them so personal...wonderful details tucked in every line.

madhumakhi said...

Lovely visually sensuous poem. Sometimes i wish i could freeze a snowflake in time, so that it may shine on forever. Merry Christmas!

Loredana Donovan said...

What a lovely picture with the snow falling effect! Snowflakes are indeed magical ... I like the contrast of white on black. Merry Christmas! :)

Vandana Sharma said...

Ah! The soft touch of snowflakes!

Sumana Roy said...

lovely...twinkling like stars at night(black dress)...Merry Christmas

Mary said...

First of all, I really enjoyed the picture. And then really liked the way you described snowflakes falling on the black dress and then vanishing like jets n the night.

Hope you have a Happy Holiday!

Ankita said...

Beautiful imagery dear, I loved your description of snow flakes vanishing like jets on black jacket. Have a snowy holiday!

Best wishes
Ankita

Stormcat Poetry said...

Vlacka
Czech for snowflake
My X gf's nickname
But I loved your poem anyway . . .

Stormcat Poetry said...

teardrops of rain
frozen like my heart

^.^ said...

Hello, Vancouver, BC ... Red Deer, AB here ... smiles ... thank you for stopping at my blog ... smiles ... Love, cat.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Aww…I found that rather sad.